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Sadly, Act 11 will have to wait a few days longer than I thought.
The Darkness of The Dreamer of Chaos Act 10
By
Wolfbane the Hedgehog




Act 10- Part 1- You are Blaze


You awaken and find that your cabin is on fire... You run outside and see that the entire camp is up in flames...


Blaze: What has happened!!?


*Sith emerges from a cabin, everything from his shoulders down is on fire and the fire is climbing even higher up his body.*


Sith(Silver) : PLEASE HELP ME!!!!


*Sith falls and stops moving, his body continues to burn*


Blaze: SILVER!!!


Blaze: WHAT IS GOING ON!!!


*Jedi runs over to you, he has fire covering everything from his waist down*


Jedi: WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US!!?


Blaze: What did I do?


Jedi: You don't even admit what you are doing here is wrong!!? WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL US BLAZE!!? WHY!!? WHAT HAVE WE EVER DONE TO YOU!!!?


*You turn around and see your face in the flames engulfing one of the cabins*


Blaze: NOOOOOOO!!!


You wake up screaming in your cabin... you can tell because only you would design your room with a cabinet to hold 7 sol emeralds and only you would give your room fire resistant by covering the floors, walls, and ceiling in fire resistant steel and the furniture in fire resistant fabrics, then get a few people to make it so everything was lavender or some for of pink. Well, mabe Amy might color everything pink that crazy b****.  Also, you can tell you were screaming because you hear it echoing off the walls of your cabin.



Sith(Silver): Blaze! Are you okay? you were screaming for about 10 seconds. Was it a bad dream?


You: Silver? When did you get here? Yes.  I had the worst dream I've ever experienced... even worse than the dreams I used to have before we went back in time...


Silver: You're fine. It was only a dream. Remember, when we leave this cabin or when any other rebels are around,, call me Sith.


You: Yes, I know. But how did you get here?


*You start to try to stand*


You feel your legs hardly holding you up.


Silver: Just lay down. Nova said you'll be fine soon, but for now you shouldn't try to get out of bed. You've been asleep for 6 hours. It's just after midnight. I came here when I carried you to your room of course.


Blaze: Well, have you been here the whole time?


Silver: Of course! I wouldn't leave your side if the world was ending!


Blaze: You're so naive... if the world were to end again before I wake up, you wouldn't be able to watch me awaken, and everybody in the world would die.


Silver: I suppose, but it's worth the risk to be by your side to watch you awaken your your sleep. I wanted to be here when you woke up even if it killed me.


Blaze: Well, thanks. You're a true friend.


Silver: Anyway, I'll stay here for a bit. If I fall asleep, don't take it as an insult. I haven't slept in 2 days.


Blaze: I won't, it's hard to stay awake for 3 days straight.


*You wink at Silver*


*Silver blushes*


*Silver sits down*


Silver: Do you still feel the power you felt before?


Blaze: I feel faint, but I can feel the power I absorbed from him within me, although it seems distant. I can actually feel myself getting stronger. Every second I feel less weakness within me.


Silver: Good. Well, good that you kept the power and that you're starting to feel better, but the part where you feel faint is not good. You know what I mean.


Blaze: I always do.


Silver: Anyway... Jedi came in to see how you were doing a few times. About once every hour. The last time was about 45 minutes ago.


Blaze: Well, maybe he'll come in while we're here.


Silver: Yeah, maybe. By the way, that chaos emerald you had is sitting in your cabinet. The one right next to the bed.


*Blaze reaches over and opens cabinet*


*Blaze reaches in and pulls out a red chaos emerald*


Blaze: Maybe if I use this, I can make myself stronger...


Silver: No. The 2nd time Jedi came in, he said that Nova told him that if you use the chaos emerald to regain your power, you will have to sacrifice the powers you have gained. He said you'll be fine in a few hours.


Blaze: Well, if it's only a few hours, then I'll keep these powers.


Silver: A few hours now, the benefit of increased power for an amount of time that could be 20 seconds or forever.


Blaze: Indeed. Anyway, anything else you want to talk about...?



Act 10- Part 2- You are now Tech

After completing the speed enhancer, you grab Drifters body and make your way toward the rebel base. You have been running for about 2 hours now and based on past experience, you would be running for about another hour and so before you saw the base, but suddenly, you see the large group of cabins ahead.


Tech: (That didn't take very long at all. But after all this running, I'll need to rest. I haven't slept in days. I hope that I make it there soon.)


When you get to the camp, you search for Tails' cabin, after a few minutes, you see him leaving one of the cabins.


Tach: Tails!


Tails: It's M-chip, remember?


*Tails looks over at you*


M-Chip(Tails) : Drifter!


*M-Chip runs over to you*


M-Chip: What happened...?


Tech: When he was in this pyramid, he said a large group of monsters attacked him. He said there were too many. He told me he defeated them all and found this...


*You  show M-Chip the stone Drifter had*


M-chip: What is that?


Tech: Not sure. He told me it teleported him to this machine in your lab. When I got there, he was about 20 feet from the machine, crawling toward the door leaving a streak of blood as he crawled. When I said I would get help, he said there was no point. When I turned to leave, he stabbed himself and died...


M-Chip: ... There is only 1 person that can do anything for him now. But no matter what, Drifter the Fox is no longer of this world...


Tech: If one person can help him, how can he still be dead? What can he do to help him without having any chance of reviving him?


M-Chip: That is not important. Bring him to Wolfbane. But address Wolfbane as Sergeant Nova.


Tech: Very well...


After about a half an hour of searching, you find him in the middle of the training field. You walk over to him, still holding Drifter in your arms.


Tech: Sergeant Nova!


Nova: *sighs* What is it, unapproved recruit?


*He turna and sees Drifter in your arms*


Nova: He is dead?


Tech: Yes.


Nova: Lay him down here. I will do what I must.


Tech: What are you going to-


Nova: GO!


*You turn and walk over to one of the cabins that says "pending" over the door.


*You lay down on the bed*



A ct 10- Part 3- You are now Espio

The Dreamer lays in her bed, you have finished another mission, you have seen the recruit ninja in action. the report on his skill levels has been filed to General Rose. You walk into your room in your cabin.


*M-Chip walks into your cabin and walks into your room*


M-Chip: What happened in the pyramid?


You(Espio) : That is confidential.


M-Chip: the confidentiallity of your assignment was compromised when Tech walked into the base with Drifters dead body in his arms.


You: What?


M-Chip: I instructed him to bring Drifter to Sergeant Nova. He is most likely gone by now.


You: I didn't even have the chance to say good bye to him. in the pyramid, about 30 skeletons with daggers, axes, and assorted blade weapons attacked us. Drifter stayed behind and told us to leave without him. I thought he could handle it and Cloak&Dagger was carrying the Dreamer in his arms. I had to escort him back here safely.


M-Chip: Is that all that happened?


You: When we left, the skeletons were getting closer to him but he looked like he was doing well. I assumed he would be fine...


M-Chip: Well, he is now in the land of the dead.. There is nothing we can do for him now.


You: Dammit... Where is he?


M-Chip: I told you, he's with Nova right now. Nova is either in the training field or in his cabin now. If you want to see Drifter before his soul is removed, you should hurry.


*You rush out of the cabin*


Act 10- Part 3- You are still Espio

You rush to Nova's cabin as fast as you can, you find that nobody is there… You run to the training field, but it is too late… Nova is starting theritual.


Espio: STOP!

*Nova stops and looks at you*

Nova: Did you want to say a few words before I do this?

You(Espio) : Yes. I didn't think it would be the last time I saw him. I need to say something before he completely passes on.

Nova: You have 2 minutes.

You: Drifter… you had taken down large groups of enemies before… what happened? Whatever it was… you were a great friend and a noble ally. We have known each other for so long that I got to know you better than you knew yourself…we had it all… us against the world… now it's over… but I shall see you in the next world. May your blade strike true and your mind remain focused, Drifter the Fox. Until we meet again.

Nova: Is that all?

You: That will be all… thank you. I won't stay for the ritual, I don't think I could stand watching that happen to him even if he is dead.

Nova: Suit yourself. I will wait until you are out of sight to do it.

*You turn and walk away*

As you walk away, a single tear rolls down your cheek.

You: (Keep it together, Espio, keep it together! Ninjas don't cry! Don't be weak!)


END OF ACT 10
Again, no spoilers! Act 11 will be up by the end of the week.
:iconprosonicincorporated:
Act 10. Again, it raises questions and answers old ones. I took a while on this one. It has emotional moments and isn't as action packed as the others, but a story where everything is just fighting is a boring story. Example- Transformers 3
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:iconsoniclink137:
True, you never want just action all the time. It's getting the right balance between the action moments and the emotional moments that makes a story great.
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~ProSonicIncorporated May 21, 2012  Professional Writer
Indeed.
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~SuperJaxxman May 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm working on an Intermission for TMM.
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~ProSonicIncorporated May 18, 2012  Professional Writer
An intermission means a break between two parts. So you're working on a part where people go buy snacks and go to the bathroom between reading parts of your story?
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*iammemyself Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup:
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~ProSonicIncorporated Dec 6, 2012  Professional Writer
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*iammemyself Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn, you win.
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~ProSonicIncorporated Dec 6, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconcoolsonicplz:
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*iammemyself Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I said you won...
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~ProSonicIncorporated Dec 6, 2012  Professional Writer
XD I know.
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